i wanted (a tragedy in three parts)

I.
i wanted
what u wanted
only
u didn’t know
what u wanted

II.
i wanted
what u wanted
only
u didn’t know
what i wanted

III.
i wanted
what u wanted
only
i didn’t know
what u wanted

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One response

  1. sashawords

    this is amazing. the structure and the repetition, but especially the subtle change in wordplay packs the biggest punch.

    May 14, 2010 at 12:21 am

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